all the things that could go wrong (response)

In class, we’re reading all the things that could go wrong, our characters are Alex, who has sensitive OCD, Elliot, Alex’s best friend, and two bullies, Sophie and Dan. About Alex’s OCD, it’s so severe for him, he can’t go to school. In one part of the story, Alex was preparing for school, he just came out of the bathroom, he was about to wash his hands and he was worried about the germs. He kept on putting soap, washes, turns it off. There are germs! He keeps on trying, but he hits with his elbow and it’s off. That’s Alex’s morning. While he was walking he was stepping on the cracks on the path. And went back everytime he did, he was always late for school. And he always brings gloves and wipes to school.

Similar books: Wonder
Ages: 9-13
Author: Stewart Foster
Star Rating: 4 stars
Would I recommend this to a friend? Yes

100 wc 10/2/20

So, me and my friend Jacob were casually walking to school, and out of nowhere we get jumped! By a Cassowary! As it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was. At first, I thought it was some drunk homeless man, but it was a cassowary! I couldn’t believe my eyes! Meanwhile, Jacob is sprinting in the other direction, yelling,”Stranger Danger!!!” He was mortified! But, oddly the Cassowary starts having a conversation, he says.”Hey buddy, wanna play some fortnite?” I thought I was going mad. My jaws literally dropped to the floor. But then I heard. “Mate, wake up.” It was actually a homeless dude. For some reason he was holding up a PS4 controller. But I was like HECK YEAH!

100 wc 2/12/19

Matt was not very intelligent, he thinks about random things. And yells them out loud. Or he’d just say it to a random person. A reason why he was not smart was because he played FORTNITE for two thirds of a day. And he is 49, I wonder what people think of him when he is yelling out things? But one day, Matt was looking for a fan, because his monitor for his Gaming Setup was to hot. So ‘outta nowhere,’ he randomly said to a really stocky, muscly guy and yelled birds can’t. So the guy responded with, no. So Matt said, they do, but then he said, What. Are. You. Gonna. Do. About. It? He broke both rib cages, his nose and both of his arms. In the clinic he said, I didn’t realise he could fly.

One hundo word challenge (8/10/19)

So I was walking around, and I saw this silver guy that was a statue, and it was looking up in the sky. So I thought what is it looking at,         So as I arrive home, I jump on my chair and go straight on to google maps. I put in the location, zoom into him and look up.
Uh….. I’ve gathered up all of my information, and it turns out…… IT WAS LOOKING AT THE SKY……. like do I need to go back to prep or what?
So I rage and smack my arm with a ruler. But, I think again, how tall is it approximately? So I grab my ruler……

 

Comments on 100 word challenge

Hi Mohamed,

You have a really nice 100 word challenge with the random elephant stepping into your school gates, but you need to improve on adding in capital letters. I said to my friend for the 1 trillionth time. You didn’t add a capital I in it. Besides that, gReAt jOb!! Giorgio

 

100 word challenge 5/9/19

Rob’s day at the zoo. Rob, a guy from Melbourne went to the zoo, to particularly see the seahorses. The line was massive, bigger than a house. 27 minutes later……….. “I made it!!!!!” He yells as he sprints of the to seahorse enclosure. When he got there, he saw something really strange. An elephant eating a purple avocado next to a pile of bones!!!!! So he sat down to watch them and then….. THEY BROKE OUT OF THEIR ‘CAGE’ (we’ll just say)
So there were a heap of people running from the roughly 300 seahorses that were streaming the the mini tsunami. All in all it was a terrible day.

100 WORD CHALLENGE (12/08/19)

‘Okay, some dude yelled out, there’s an eagle. I turned around, hmmph. Why do I feel so weird? It’s because…… THE WHOLE WORLD JUST SPAN AROUND AS I TURNED. Luckily, there’s a pharmacy across the road. 5 minutes later….. “Bad news bro, your neck literally snapped.” The doc said. I say back,”wow, but why do I feel so good.
“I gave you Advil.” He replies. “What is Advil gonna do mate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” “No clue. 10 minutes later.

The doctor

Now Bob thinks, what should I do, but 3.278 seconds later, he thought of getting a neck cast. so now, he’s gonna be walking around with his head looking up to the clouds. Remember kids, don’t turn around when a dude yells out, there’s an eagle.

MPPS science night

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This year Moonee Ponds Primary School are hosting a science night!!!!! The topic this year is ‘destination moon’!!!! It will be hosted in the hall located on the side of the school. It will be hosted from 6 pm until 7 pm. You will see the magnificent work the kids have been doing. As well as all of that be sure to bring binoculars! You will learn the challenges that Neil Armstrong had come across while building the Apollo 11 or him actually landing on the moon. If you come along, Enjoy.

Comments

Hamish

Hi Hamish, on your 100 word challenge you wrote “what a nice day” with no comma at the start of the story, although your story is great.

Mohamed

Hi Mohamed, your GST facts you wrote were very good although, your Luigi background, is really hard not to concentrate on, other than that your facts were really good.

Damien

Hi Damien, on your piece 18/6/19 you wrote, ‘So the man thought,’ you put no capital at the start of your sentence. Other than that your story was good.

Alex

Hi Alex, your story was really good, since it had really good word choice in it. Great piece!

Chelsea 2 (Giorgio and Hamish)

This year Chelsea FC Have won the Europa league and came third in the EPL this season, we made a couple of transfer, Pulisic and Bakayoko. Some of the downs this year are losing one of the best players in the world and probably one of the best players for Chelsea ever, Eden Hazard. Losing a lot of the key games. But, who cares, since we’re in the Champions League!

Chelsea Champions League and EPL lineup recommendations:

LW: WILLIAN                             ST: HIGUAIN                                             RW: PULISIC

 

CM: JORGINHO                                                                                            CM: KOVACIC                                                                                                            CDM: KANTE

LB: ALONSO                                                                                                    RB: AZPILICUETA
CB: RUDIGER                     CB: LUIZ

GK: KEPA

All Chelsea title wins
Eight FA cups
Five league cups
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